Things forever gone!
Memories forlorn!
Nightmares that haunt,
Fears, they daunt.
The only sounds, they mock,
-the Clock's ticktock.
Silence! It kills.
A void, a space, unfilled.
Wishes on a star,
Hope, seems distant, far.
Aloof from the world,
A world, so cold.
A lifetime of pretence
A journey that never ends.
I never meant to feel this way,
Sad, empty , it's hard to say.
ALONE!
10 comments:
hmmmm dont no wat 2 say!!!!!!hmmmm amazin!!!! simply superb!!!!!!!ur alone no mor!!!!!!"talent" romba jaasthi pa unaku!!!!!!!
This is SO lovely. But I don't want my little girl to be alone. Take refuge in the fact that you can write and express the way you feel. Feel comfort in the fact that many can't express in such beautiful words how terrible being alone can be.
Love you, lovely little girl.
the poem drips of loneliness.. sends melancholic vibes all over.. touched me to the core.. as if somewhere deep inside this verse were created by me.. suspended in nothing ness.. just beautiful!
hey..:) nice poem...cute way of expressing "loneliness"..and by the way, v all r here..wont let u b alone..:))
aama.. its tuff 2 say i'm alone..
so, lets not say individually i'm alone..
instead lets say "we" r alone.. lolz! ;)
nice lines.... very thoughtfully sculpted.. and shows its own uniqueness... though sounding a bit desperate .. just rocking.... Hats off aki..(i think these lies will suffice you.. lol.... just kidding)
really nice.. keep 'em coming...
Hey.. definitely not bad.. ALONE.. Hmmmm :)
expressive... itz touchin, i would say... keep goin n u will not b alone...:-)
I feel, your poems look really superb when you pen something down about what you really experience. This is one such masterpiece. Excellent wordings and cute poem. Loved it!
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