I'd like to dedicate this poem to a special friend of mine who felt the same way recently. Girl, you mean a lot to me... this goes for you...
Smiling face,
With such a grace,
Like the blossomed flower.
Soaring high,
Hovering, grazing the sky,
Like the cloud’s about to shower.
Happiness gushing
And Cheeks blushing
Like a new born child
With such a grace,
Like the blossomed flower.
Soaring high,
Hovering, grazing the sky,
Like the cloud’s about to shower.
Happiness gushing
And Cheeks blushing
Like a new born child
Dancing, grooving,
Surprisingly unnerving,
Like I’ve gone wild
Feeling poetical!
Reasons? Mystical!
Like the heavens above
Magical mood,
I feel so good,
As if I’m in love
Surprisingly unnerving,
Like I’ve gone wild
Feeling poetical!
Reasons? Mystical!
Like the heavens above
Magical mood,
I feel so good,
As if I’m in love
12 comments:
aki.:)
ha ha
this one is nthe nicest among all the other entries!
:)its cool!
so, searching for ur guy so soon??
he he..hmm kalakku
or u ve already got him??
;)
cute poem with chosen words!
i love it!
it's wonderful! :)
and reno, it's never too soon... ;)
reminds me f aneeez's masterpice....... lol....juzz kiddin..... :) :) :).... cute poemmm..!!!!!! kp it up......bt kadasi verakum andha aasami yarunu solla matingaraaaaaa..... :( :(
kewt one! and after a long time!
Do I know this girl you're dedicating the poem to? :P
wat can i do if THE GIRL herself asks such question.. ;)
=)) Well, the others should know who that girl is, right? :P
fallen in love??? wow.. thats nice... and i hope we can get more nice poems from you aki... Poem is really nice... sorry i saw it very late since i was held up in my work.. Kudos.. Keep your creativity alive.. :)
Hey sorry - too late... heavy stuff mate.... i like this one especially... Really cool
wow!!! now ur poetry has got its form..:-)
u seem to bring out the feel so well with the best words...
to be precise u r proving to be the "poetic princess " once again...keep rocking...expecting ur next creation...
:-) :-)
how come no new post in ages?
no new inspirations... searching for the right words and just the right one...:)
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