Mounted on a majestic stallion, he stood high on a cliff,
From under his hat, he looked
At the barren land, deserted
Like his heart, that was once tough.
The sky hung low, clouds drifting nice and slow,
Softly, the wind grazed his face,
Like her gentle touch, he missed.
If only he'd known, she's a bird; he wouldn't have let her go.
Nothing said, not a word! His expression, lost!
For in those clouds, were etched,
Her smiling face, heavenly, beautiful, bright
From his impassive face, from those hazel eyes, a stinging tear said it all!
To this land he called his own, remained he now, a stranger.
Mighty once, now hollow and weak,
A detached soul, incomplete without her.
He missed her so his heart and soul, the solitary lone ranger.
10 comments:
Was ist diese? Diese ist Toll, Fantastisch. Ohne seine Liebe er weint.
wow. this is really wonderful. Well English literature has really missed a treasure and Geo-informatix is lucky. :)
Very well written aki. hats off.
hey that's really cool mate... Very beautiful...
cool.... seems like there are quite a few solitary rangers in our campus too ;)
and quite a lot of birds too...
nevertheless.. its a little gem, uve written. expecting another one soon (like the ranger :)..)
CLASS.
That's the word I can think of when I see this work. This poem exudes class. It's plain fantastic. Keep up the good work! :)
beautiful!!
HELLO POET,
AKI FIRST I WANT TO SAY YOU ARE NOT AN ORDINARY CREATION OF GOD... REALLY AN ANGEL FROM HEAVEN TO CHANGE THIS CRAZY WORLD TO A HEAVEN... WHEN COMPARED TO ALL UR CREATION I FELT THIS IS THE BEST ONE.TO EXPRESS THE FEELING OF MISSING SOMEONE.I CONCLUDE YOUR RANGER IS THE BEST WAY TO EXPRESS. YOUR CREATIONS ARE OUTSTANDING AND EXCELLENT PLS KEEP GIVING GIFTS TO US FOREVER LIKE THIS TO HAVE THE PLEASURE IN FORM OF CUTE WORDS... BUT PLS KEEP IN MIND FOR EACH AND EVERY WORDS U DESERVE THE TITLLE AS "BEST POET".KEEP IT UP. ALL THE BEST FOR UR UPCOMING POEMS..
hey aki...cool one..
but, why do you always bring in a melancholic tone in almost all your poems ??
anyway, its nice.
cha..ena poem idhu ramba kevalama irku.....ipdi oru matta karu mandramana poema en vazhkaila padichadhillla...i wasted my 300 sec in thissss......no feelinssss..betr luck nxt time...ipdi elam solvenu thnkd a...EVLO VATI DAN aki nalla irku phantasmagorica irkunu bayangarama yosikirenu solradhu.....solli solli bore adichuruchu......adhan konjam diff a comment try panen.... hw is it :)
WOW.!! I mean... I mean it.! Seriously... one of the best of urs... Great work Cindy.. :)
Mind blowing... really wonderful.. thanks for allowing me to read...
Post a Comment