Apple-Green grass, soft and wet,
Strewn with the morning dew.
The insects asleep in their plush bed,
Wake up to the dawn anew.
Arches of vine, with perfect curves,
Rays of light gliding through,
A bright day, with the beaming sun,
In a vast sky, so blue.
Butterflies dance, the bees sing,
Among those exotic flowers,
In hues only the Heavens would know,
Oh! Those unexplainable colors!
Birds chirp, with their wonderful voice,
No earthly song seems more musical!
A heaven on earth, a utopia,
This is a garden so magical!
A distant thread of a Waterfall
With its sweet waters aglow,
Gushes before its dramatic plunge,
Into the slithering snake of a river below.
Overlooking a narrow gorge,
That's guarded, colossal-walled,
A scenic beauty! The nature's spectacle!
The divine stand enthralled
…………to be continued
8 comments:
Hey Aki....a poem after a very long time.... long awaited treasure?? wonderful... to be continued !!!! great... Wünderbar.... keep going aki...
I'm totally captured by this... Awesome work.. Each word was chosen best.. METICULOUS !!!
You picturise nature so well.. It was seen in ur prev poems too..
Lets see how many parts you can take dis ... :)
Awww!!!
hai and hello aki thank u for giving us an wonderful and colourful morning in mood..... great job aki pls complete it soon hmmmm great keep rocking i knew u r the only one to compete u so pls try to give us the best in all times ...... alll the best poet
Aki! now say who's carrying a word power book in mind?
:P
hey terrific work of urs...I fancy your fantasy! u rock aki..In particular i liked this line "rays of light gliding through!"
Enthrall your blog followers with more poems like this!
:)
I caught snatches of what you were writing yesterday, so I knew what to expect. A beautiful fantasy, this. And explained in such sweet detail too. Waiting for the next part already! Please don't keep me waiting for long.
fantasy - part 1.....d title is apt 4 d poemmmm.....:) :)... "in hues oly d heaven wld knw"....awsme lineeee...i like butter flies a lot....bt nva hear d any1 desc abt butter flies in my life like tht b4..... ur imagination is really up up thr ..well done...utopia..anew....hmmm... d choice of wrdss is damn gddd....kp it up.....lukin fwd to d part-2 edition... :)
Wow.. amzing aki.. how do u manage to write such amzing lines.
Arches of vine, with perfect curves,
Rays of light gliding through,
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