He has the Strongest Hands and roughest Palm
A Touch that can break things
but I wonder how it suddenly turns
the kindest, the softest on me!
He has the Amazing eyes, calm and deep,
A Look that says a million.
Under those penetrating gaze I cannot lie
'cause they dig the truth from underneath.
He has an Aura, powerful and bright
that lightens up day and night
He is protective and radiates warmth
I feel safe, sound and alright.
He has a Soothing voice, a trusted one,
tender in advice, commanding in orders.
It's His hallmark, His brand,
that ascribes to Him but none.
He is handsome, He is unique,
A Man who inspires, a One to admire.
He hates it when i come home late
keeps the other guys at bay.
Hard on the outside and soft on the inside,
He is the best, One of a kind.
Oh no! HE is not my Boyfriend,
HE is my DAD.
7 comments:
a very innocent, soft n fresh piece of work. loved it! oddly touchin, babe :) >:D< :*
sweet!!!
Loved the simplicity.. shows profoundity of the emotion!
hey tats lovely!
:)
i enjoyed reading it!
dedicated to paternity eh?!
:)
nice
hmmm u call these "plain words"????? best poem i hav evr read!!!!promise......wat words 2 use?.hmmmmm....... fantastic? marvelous? awesome?hmmmm my english runs short of the best words to comment abt ur work!!!!!!!it s "the best"..........
luvlyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!! by d way.... did u dedicate it 2 ur dad on fathers day???!!!
Coool.... Abt Dad huh? Very simple n sweet... Hey ya cud ve made it sound more poetic i guess, der wer words wich wer rhyming... cud hav put r8 words in r8 places..
poet each and every words r superb
good sense of touch keep it up ma
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