This post is supposed to be romantic.. but somehow... I find it very funny... Have a laugh.. :-)
Heads bent,
Exotic scent,
Silence, strangely pleasant.
Strongly tethered,
Touch lingered,
Fingers! Perhaps feathered!
Blood boil,
Inner turmoil,
Thoughts, dirty spoilt.
Hearts beat,
Senses entreat,
This intimate feat,
Letting go-
A death blow.
Wish times slow.
Feelings anew,
I never knew,
Until your adieu.
My lost snug,
Alas! To you,
It's just a Hug!
9 comments:
:) LOVELY. not funny, honey, jus fantabulous.
hey aki
:)
ha ha..u also started writing romantic stuffs like me eh!
but this one is cool!
a hyperbole for a "hug"
he he ..nice
:)
keep writing buddy!
hey not funny!!!!!!!! ha romantic!!!! vry nice!!!!!soooper!! must show my sis!!!!!!!!!
this is really romantic... i should say the feelings are having a high degree of spiciness... masala... but the words used are fantastic.. words wisely chosen.. aki is this just imagination or a real life exerience??? :) just kidding... really beautiful, brilliant.. looking forward more romantic poems from you..
;)
hey Akila. Cool blog mate... Really beautiful poems.... i never thought u were into this kind of stuff... U apparently Inspired me to start a blog..
very intersting....
keep writing
Wow..! Tell ya wat... This one s absolutely superb.. :) Very Romantic indeed... Really captivating Cindy :)How can one say its funny? NO way!!!!
hey really romantic... hey itz nice... expectin many ramantic stuffs like dis yaar...:-)
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