Sunday, May 11, 2008

Friends..........


As wind, as breeze, as hurricane

He blows.

As river, as streams, as the ocean

She flows.

As heat, as light , as the sun

He glows.

As mountains, as islands, like a mother

She holds.

Unique! Yet so together,

Neither is complete without the other.

The best of companions , the epitome of stature.

The elements of nature.

6 comments:

Neeru Iyer said...

jesus christ, akila, u r jus too good! this is AWFULLY wonderful!!!

Renold Devaraj said...

oh ma gosh!!
you r a young poetess!
akila!!..jus mind blowing!!..m dumbstruck..don hav any words to comment..simply superb aki
:)

vignesh venkatasubramanian said...

ena poem idhu.....ena poem idhu... cngratsss.... nxt noble prize 4 poetry 4 u olyyyyy...... :-) :-)

Unknown said...

ehh..entha class poem booka pathu copy adicha...sollave ella..K.D

Aki..... said...

hey do i look like the one to copy... LOL

Unknown said...

poetess......i am dumb!!!!!!!! cant speak!!!!!!!!! ASTONISHED!!!!