Sunday, May 11, 2008

Disappointed.....






She looked up ,


her flushed face so eager.


Its time for him to arrive,


their awaited little get-together.


Oh! Don't leave Dark cloud!


There must be a shower.


But she never met Him, the rain


The poor little flower.

6 comments:

Neeru Iyer said...

*whistles* u r becoming marvelous-er and marvelous-er day by day...

Renold Devaraj said...

heey akila!..thats fantastic..a small word of praise for u in deutsch..
"wunderbar!!!!!!!!"
:)))
keep givin us such great poems!

vignesh venkatasubramanian said...

....... a gd o.henry twist @ d end f poem... nice 1111...... :)

Winnie the poohi said...

wow!

Unknown said...

aiyo aiyo!!!!! hmmmmmm super....... gr8 imagination!!! start writin romantic poems tooooooooo!!!!!!!

Sakthi said...

That is just awesome... Your style is seen in this cute lines. You say whatever you feel in your poems and blame as if a flower or nature is saying it huh??!??! :) Good work!