It is so dark in here,
It's been the same, since I could remember.
My hands and legs starts to shiver,
but Her single soft stroke stops the quiver.
With all the trouble I gave, she coped.
I'm protected, cared and very much loved.
I'll see the world so soon,
Till then, I'm wrapped in Her warm cocoon.
Until I'm ready, She'll see me through,
Her love is guaranteed for the future too.
As soon as I come out, I will cry out loud,
"I trust Her, I thank Her, I love Her, for good."
10 comments:
really awesome... hats off...
wonderful piece of poetry, honey. u r doin a fantastic job. >:D< :* im glad uve discovered this talent in urself. u r such a natural at this!
n ya, dedicate to ur mom, ok? *ahem ahem*
wow!!!
i dunno tis much of english..
wowwwwwwwwwwwwww!
a tribute to "motherhood"
thats gr8
:)
ur mom would b delighted to see tat her daughter(aki) s good in writin such poems!
:)
u must ask shakespeare or wordsworth to comment abt this poetry!!!!hmmmmmmmm gr8...pichitta ,pinnita....super po!!!!!!!!!!!
gd one...bt a small advice.... whn ya rite this kinda poem...juzzz make it a bit mre murkier n darker to brng abt d real human emotionss so tht ur poems DO have an effect on d persons readin it.......
Nah.. I don lik dis.. Very bland.. Nothing catchy cindy!!!
great.. no words to praise a mom and ur work... really amazing... bows to you...
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